My Thriller idea

For our coursework we were supposed to make our own thriller idea and then to present it to the class, and afterwards the whole class is voting for some ideas which will be then produced.
For my Thriller movie I had two ideas. The first is called 'The Black Rose' which deals with a girl whos mother died and she wants to buy a flower for her dad. The old woman in the flowershop gave her a really 'special' flower: a black rose. The girl takes it home and puts it on the table of her fathers desk in the near of the bed.
In the next morning when she comes into the room of her dad, he is dead in his bed, blood over all and the head is cut off.
The girl goes again to the old woman and buys because of sadness a flower. She puts it on her desk and goes to sleep. In the middle of the night she wakes up, looks to the rose. In this moment a hand with a knife comes out. The girl takes suddenly the knife and cuts the hand in the flower off.
The next day she goes to the flower shop and sees the old woman who just has one hand. Shock on her face. And then black.
For this idea the locations would be a bedroom and a room which is looking like a flowershop.
The equipment I would need for this idea is a black rose, a bed and a knife. The characters are the old lady in the flower shop, teenager girl, and the dad. The tension is generated because of the darkness in the scene where the hand comes out of the flower. The institution of making the film would be TV production CO like CH4.


The second idea is about a little girl who is alone at home. Her dog lays under her bed like every night. So that she is not scared, she lets her hand down so that her dog can lick her hand. In a wide shot you can see her leting her hand down and under the bed laying the murderer. She falls asleep. A second later she wakes up because she hears something dropping, like a water tap.
She stands up and goes into the kitchen. Nothing. She goes back to bed. Falls again asleep. A second later she wakes up again. The watertap is still dropping. She goes into the bathroom. Nothing. She goes back to bed. But the dropping is not stopping.
So she goes again into the bathroom, takes the shower curtain away and the dog, hanging, the tummy slit, blood over all. In blood letters is on the wall: Also murderers can lick. Her face in a close up. Then the title: 'Psychopath'.
For this idea the location would be a bedroom, a kitchen and a bathroom.
The tension is generated because the auidence can see the murderer under her bed so that the audience knows before the protagonist knows what is going on. For this idea I would need for the equipment dog which is slit, a bed and a shower curtain. The character has to be a little girl and a men with scary eyes. I think it is a good idea because most of young kids are scared by what is laying under the bed. So the movie would be something for people in the age of 16-24.